“Evan pulls into a firm lead in the race to womanhood when his hair becomes longer and cuter to match his changed face. So far Kyle is the only one to see people change, but he has no idea what to make of it, or even if it’s really happening. Soon, Matthew joins in on the fun.”
If you think Evan looks different, it’s even more surprising when you compare him to what he was at the start.
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Love the dogy
Oh dear, it’s starting to ramp up….
It is Jamie Cummings-McCarthy all over again.
Nice. Evan begin to looks really cute. Dangling earrings with blue rhinestones would match with his sapphire necklace.
To all of those that are complaining about the speed of the story,
A good story, like anything else, is done slowly and develops. If you want to build a good sturdy home do you want to build it in a few weeks? Or a favorite meal cooked in just a few minutes?
And think of this, if the story was rushed through, not only would it be poorer quality, it would come to an end so much quicker… and so would your enjoyment of it.
I can see why some might think the story is going slowly but it is very similar, even faster in some regards than Shifting Roommates. It is not the same speed as the animations of DP but I like the the way it is going. Great work Sam.
Woahhh what if the red Fox broke too and same incident happened then both apprentices found eachother and transformed a lot of people while duking it out?
This Story Really needs to pick up, Feeling like a drag now
You’ll be getting that soon enough.
is it just me or is the Korean dude starting to grow tits?
Just not loosing all of his weight I guess
I’d say so!
I don’t know how you two can said that. His chest look like no form. I want to the hair face change. I did see that. I like them to wear make-up and high heels. At this speed that will be in 20 days.
thanks for the before-after, I didn’t notice so much !
I so want someone to lose there manhood now! The junk is always the last thing to go. The changes are so slow the shock won’t be as great. It be fun to see a player lose his pride and joy. Before he looks to much like a women
Who says one or two can’t lose it earlier?
Some guys are not that macucline and losing the manhood wouldn’t be that traumatizing. Try using my idea for who ever loses the dick first
Loss of manhood next page confirmed!!!!!
Half Life 3 confirmed.
Isn’t karma an interesting concept.
I wonder will the Fox make it back to the meeting place at all?
Good work!
I really like Evan and Kyle’s relationship when they’re together, it’s so real to life compared to when people are together.