Rookie Mistake

By | September 7, 2020

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evelynnrose
1 month ago

Please make this a series

0._.0 CyanCoyote
2 months ago

Alexis is Isaac’s little brother ?

Zillatrek
Reply to  0._.0 CyanCoyote
2 months ago

No, Alexis is not related to Isaac. Just because they’re both black doesn’t mean that they’re related. To think that they are related just because they’re black would be racist.

Also, Isaac said in GIC that he’s an only child.

Inquisitor Three
Reply to  Zillatrek
1 month ago

A bit insensitive of you to assume it was them both being black that led him to ask, rather than his willingness to accept Austin, suggesting he had seen that kind of thing before

Hovenweep
2 months ago

This should be a three or four part series. With the opportunities this story line has, a series would be great!!

Brooke Noelle
3 months ago

Damn, Brianna’s hot! I wish I could ~accidentally~ end up in her situation!

AdroableDane
4 months ago

Please make a part two

Maddie
5 months ago

I will echo everyone else in saying I would not mind seeing a part 2 to this especially if there is a lesson from Alistair in it. One thing I do want to ask is were did the inspiration come from for the lingerie set come from? Because I would love to get my hands on a set 🙂

Parlax
5 months ago

Ha Ha A huge mistake at your first job

Obsidian_Wolf
5 months ago

I think the first 2 minutes and 18 seconds are the best part.

Napsnap
5 months ago

Continue this series!

Kim Johnson
Kim Johnson
5 months ago

I’m sorry but that controller he was using was so unforgivable bad It hurts. How many people did it go through? Was that a last minute shot? Was everyone suffering a brain hemorrhage

D The Weeb To Magic Girl Dee
5 months ago

I’m starting to think that this universe version of Chris is also bi.

JD Washington
Reply to  D The Weeb To Magic Girl Dee
5 months ago

What makes you think that?

DalkothSeer
Reply to  D The Weeb To Magic Girl Dee
5 months ago

Im not sure id say bi. More that he just has “experience” from a females point of view. Having had quite a lot of time in a female form.

yumei
5 months ago

Chris should know that curses make them considerably harder to transform using transformation magic. He ran into that problem when he tried to transform Nikki at the end of maker’s game:

https://www.sapphirefoxx.com/makers-game-page-433/

Is he dumb enough to forget that? Or is this earlier chronologically?

MarkoDan92
MarkoDan92
Reply to  yumei
5 months ago

Not necessarily remember even though chris has learned a lot since he has met Issebelle he is still quite new too magic even now its easy to make a mistake like this when you consider the curse effects transgender people he obviously presumed the curse would be in a mans body rather than a person who is transitioning and he obviously forgot to check if there was a curse in the persons body hence the title
(Rookie Mistake)

Last edited 5 months ago by Daniel
DalkothSeer
Reply to  MarkoDan92
5 months ago

Adding on to that the situation with a him expecting a MTF transformation, the setting of a lone guy in room surrounded by feminine product and figure enhancers like Sili gel and padded bras, plus the fact he went to coordinates give to him and found only one person there sort of makes this mistake more understandable. While i would like to see a part 2 i think this one will stay a one shot. I see this more of a fun little fluke story meant to add to the character. Clearly since he plans to come back for the… Read more »

doogobloogo
doogobloogo
Reply to  DalkothSeer
5 months ago

ok but you’re tell me that chris would go “oh yeas this dude here who CLEARLY hasn’t put on any of the sili gel, must be my target” like the camera puts an emphasis on the sili gel so chris should be able to take his 2 brain cells and think yeah maybe not my guy, especially when he can’t feel a curse. also you’re telling me alistair in his ultimate wisdom who gave chris the cords and everything AND THE NAME OF THE TARGET would not give a physical description, you know like the very fact its the black… Read more »

Zillatrek
Reply to  doogobloogo
5 months ago

It’s possible that Brandon could have put on sili-gel in the past and just wasn’t wearing any at that moment. After all, he was sleeping. Why put on sili-gel if you’re just going to go to sleep? I can see why Chris would think that was Brandon’s sili-gel and he just wasn’t wearing any. Also, Alistair didn’t give Chris a name because Alistair never knows the names of the people he cures before visiting them. Hell, it’s been made clear that Alistair himself doesn’t know anything about the people he cures other than that they have Sylvana’s curse. Most of… Read more »

Last edited 5 months ago by Zillatrek
phantom115cw
5 months ago

I want to see  Isabel pregnant 

MarkoDan92
MarkoDan92
Reply to  phantom115cw
5 months ago

I think were still away’s off before that happens but yeah I would love to see Chris ans Issy start a family in the future
p.s
what do you think the names of their kids would be sound off in the reply’s to give your opinions

DalkothSeer
Reply to  MarkoDan92
5 months ago

Amber, Nora, & Nolan

MarkoDan92
MarkoDan92
Reply to  DalkothSeer
5 months ago

I like that name’s of Alistair’s oldest daughter Issy’s Mom and Chris’s Dad

Last edited 5 months ago by Daniel
saraXurtch
5 months ago

Yes please! This HAS to be a mini-series for sure!! Also, can you please share who the music is from at the very end? That song is dope as hell!

saraXurtch
Reply to  saraXurtch
5 months ago

Also, nice work on the writing, Paul!

IAmRachel
5 months ago

definitely a part 2! this is exciting!