Rookie Mistake

By | September 7, 2020

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Obsidian_Wolf
1 day ago

I think the first 2 minutes and 18 seconds are the best part.

Napsnap
10 days ago

Continue this series!

Kim Johnson
Kim Johnson
10 days ago

I’m sorry but that controller he was using was so unforgivable bad It hurts. How many people did it go through? Was that a last minute shot? Was everyone suffering a brain hemorrhage

D The Weeb
12 days ago

I’m starting to think that this universe version of Chris is also bi.

JD Washington
Reply to  D The Weeb
12 days ago

What makes you think that?

DalkothSeer
Reply to  D The Weeb
12 days ago

Im not sure id say bi. More that he just has “experience” from a females point of view. Having had quite a lot of time in a female form.

yumei
12 days ago

Chris should know that curses make them considerably harder to transform using transformation magic. He ran into that problem when he tried to transform Nikki at the end of maker’s game:

https://www.sapphirefoxx.com/makers-game-page-433/

Is he dumb enough to forget that? Or is this earlier chronologically?

MarkoDan92
MarkoDan92
Reply to  yumei
12 days ago

Not necessarily remember even though chris has learned a lot since he has met Issebelle he is still quite new too magic even now its easy to make a mistake like this when you consider the curse effects transgender people he obviously presumed the curse would be in a mans body rather than a person who is transitioning and he obviously forgot to check if there was a curse in the persons body hence the title
(Rookie Mistake)

Last edited 12 days ago by Daniel
DalkothSeer
Reply to  MarkoDan92
12 days ago

Adding on to that the situation with a him expecting a MTF transformation, the setting of a lone guy in room surrounded by feminine product and figure enhancers like Sili gel and padded bras, plus the fact he went to coordinates give to him and found only one person there sort of makes this mistake more understandable. While i would like to see a part 2 i think this one will stay a one shot. I see this more of a fun little fluke story meant to add to the character. Clearly since he plans to come back for the… Read more »

doogobloogo
doogobloogo
Reply to  DalkothSeer
10 days ago

ok but you’re tell me that chris would go “oh yeas this dude here who CLEARLY hasn’t put on any of the sili gel, must be my target” like the camera puts an emphasis on the sili gel so chris should be able to take his 2 brain cells and think yeah maybe not my guy, especially when he can’t feel a curse. also you’re telling me alistair in his ultimate wisdom who gave chris the cords and everything AND THE NAME OF THE TARGET would not give a physical description, you know like the very fact its the black… Read more »

Zillatrek
Reply to  doogobloogo
10 days ago

It’s possible that Brandon could have put on sili-gel in the past and just wasn’t wearing any at that moment. After all, he was sleeping. Why put on sili-gel if you’re just going to go to sleep? I can see why Chris would think that was Brandon’s sili-gel and he just wasn’t wearing any. Also, Alistair didn’t give Chris a name because Alistair never knows the names of the people he cures before visiting them. Hell, it’s been made clear that Alistair himself doesn’t know anything about the people he cures other than that they have Sylvana’s curse. Most of… Read more »

Last edited 10 days ago by Zillatrek
phantom115cw
12 days ago

I want to see  Isabel pregnant 

MarkoDan92
MarkoDan92
Reply to  phantom115cw
12 days ago

I think were still away’s off before that happens but yeah I would love to see Chris ans Issy start a family in the future
p.s
what do you think the names of their kids would be sound off in the reply’s to give your opinions

DalkothSeer
Reply to  MarkoDan92
12 days ago

Amber, Nora, & Nolan

saraXurtch
13 days ago

Yes please! This HAS to be a mini-series for sure!! Also, can you please share who the music is from at the very end? That song is dope as hell!

saraXurtch
Reply to  saraXurtch
13 days ago

Also, nice work on the writing, Paul!

IAmRachel
13 days ago

definitely a part 2! this is exciting!

The Emerald Panther
13 days ago

Please make a Part 2, this would make a great mini series, not to mention that it would be cruel for Chris to leave them stuck like that.
Alistair, Isabelle, and Ashley won’t be happy when they find out about this, especially since one of them will have to clean up Chris’ mess.
Am I the only one that recognized the music at the beginning from Swap Poker?

saraXurtch
Reply to  The Emerald Panther
13 days ago

Yeah I recognized it right away as the Swap Poker song. But I really wanna know where I can listen to the full song at the end!

Jennythepenny2015
13 days ago

Chris you colossal moron

Tarlia
Reply to  Jennythepenny2015
12 days ago

Yes he is.

AuraTerrorbird
Reply to  Tarlia
11 days ago

I wouldn’t say Chris is an idiot, but like everyone else, he ain’t perfect.

LaudoMatriae
13 days ago

The best part about this is that Chris is actually stupid enough to make a mistake like this.

Tarlia
Reply to  LaudoMatriae
12 days ago

The more storylines that involve Chris, the more I think that Isabelle can do better.

LaudoMatriae
Reply to  Tarlia
9 days ago

Eh, his idiodicness is charming in it’s own way.

jonesbbq
13 days ago

Please make a part 2. I feel so bad now lol.

debrebuf
13 days ago

More of this, please!

JD Washington
13 days ago

I love these types of one-shots where there are returning characters along with the new ones, and they all get development in the story. This is why this episode and Top It Off are now my favorites.

Also, this is great throwback to Chris’s own misadventures during Different Perspectives. I feel bad for Alexis and Briana though; I hope Chris fixes this. So, I wouldn’t mind at least one more episode of this.

Blackwater Park
Blackwater Park
Reply to  JD Washington
13 days ago

It’s funnier if kept a One shot because of the irony

DalkothSeer
Reply to  Blackwater Park
13 days ago

I second that you know he’s gotta come back to collect the curse anyway. Plus we see he’s at least helping Aliestier in Awakening so we know he didnt get fully rejected. I like it when things are left up to the imagination but we still see its headed the right direction. Clearly he comes back, learns his mistake, fixes it, and likely gets a talking to but hopefully he learns his lesson for any future endeavors.

IronmanMK265
13 days ago

Those two are honestly a cute couple