I theorize when Dakota transformed she was kinda open to it, admiring herself in the mirror. Her line “I’d be amazed how pretty I am if I wasn’t so confused”–seems neutral, maybe mildly receptive.

Felix didn’t exactly contradict that. More of a “that was so disruptive of Dakota’s life”, not “Dakota hates this.”

Having…Read more

Oh huh, never made the connection with Back to Class.

I picked up on Dakota and Fernanda being mentioned in this one right away cause that really felt like a story that could use a follow up.

But it totally went over my head that the red haired kid in Back to Class was the same character.

That said, this one did keep my interest better than most.

• A callback to “the date”, including sipping a drink causing the transformation
• Straight up discussion of Cinder Isle.
• The “movie” in the background at 3:40 is “Booby Trap” when they discover the tomb
• “Booby Trap” audio picks back up at 6:20 talking about Jamila Hieroglyphs

I’m honestly inclined to rationalize it as magic being involved making her not notice Erika’s behaviour.

But yeah, I’m enjoying this one.

When I’ve been poor, or when my size changed unexpectedly I’ve often owned around 3-4 bras and gotten away with it. Obviously not…Read more

Also…in real life 30:38 is not that uncommon. (One of the three most commonly listed sizes on bratabase. Plenty of example pictures of 30FF on the bra band project).

Victoria’s Secret not carrying that size is tragically…Read more

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Not like a button popping is super painful or anything, but normally you’d feel it.

I like the stories where the transformee isn’t a terrible person.

I usually like to imagine myself as the person getting transformed, and that’s a lot harder to do when the transformee is some super horrible person; not very relatable.

I get the sense that Dakota is actually fem on the inside (long hair before transformation, was in awe of being pretty post transformation, romantic but not sexual).

I could see Jack taking advantage of that, reading her mind, bribing her with larger boobs if she’ll stay a girl. And I could see…Read more

Ah yes, an analogy that I am sure these non-bloods will understand perfectly.

Regardless, this scene is…in the middle for me? Sometimes I actively dislike sex scenes when extra ones are added that don’t serve the plot. Sometimes I really like sex scenes when there’s a lot of…Read more

But yes, Hunter’s favourite moving be “The Hunter” is pretty funny.

The third panel, it’s a fade between their clothing and the bathing suit things.

Why does hunter’s junk fade out? Why does he seem so flat down there? Probably just a visual error, granted. But if it’s not a visual error–is that actually clothing? Is hunter sticking socks and marbles in his underwear to hide how…Read more

The first is that the hunter forms diverged after hunter did the solo stone press, and that now that Lindsey has done a solo stone press we’ll see the Lindsey forms diverge too.

The…Read more

Literally from the relevant verse of the ten commandments in Exodus 20:7, the relevant verse uses the name יהוה, followed by Elohim.…Read more

“Is that your little brother?”

Maybe something more subtle is changing? Like…maybe Hunter’s nipples could be growing while Linsey’s nipples could be shrinking?

EDIT: then…Read more

The fact that Damon now thinks he can beat Ashley’s magic is interesting.

Hm, your track record isn’t great when it comes to that.

I feel really bad for Raegan, though.

But beyond content adapted to the main site has felt so-so.

I’m a pretty big fan of shifting roommates as a comic, but this animation miniseries just…failed to really appeal.

Not everyone who gets transformed needs to be an asshole.

In fact often in the SF universe being transformed it’s a nice thing (even if the transformee doesn’t realize it right away).

There’s every sign that she’s pretty comfortable with the change. (Outright says “being a girl is way more exciting”). There’s none of…Read more

I have trouble putting myself into the shoes of either Gwendolyn or Prince Aldrich at the end of the story. Prince Aldritch is too much of a dick for me to want to imagine myself as that character, and Gwendolyn seems very happy about being in a man’s body (can’t relate).

But Aurora? Hell…Read more

I think maybe I just appreciated the first person Leanna perspective. Both a perspective I prefer in general, and also one that fit the story since obviously we are getting Leanna’s perspective in the story and Glenn is hiding stuff from us.